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Horatio and I
The Beginning
This was it. Today was the day. I was going to walk in that bank and get my money. I parked my getaway car in the street in front of the bank. I walked in. “EVERYONE ON THE FLOOR! THIS IS A ROBBERY!” I pulled out my gun, and I heard screaming and I saw people lying on the floor. I walked up to the tellers. I thought I saw her hand move near the counter… “Don’t touch the alarm or I’ll shoot you. Is that clear?” She nodded. “I want all the money in your drawers, put it in this bag. You!” I said, turning to the other teller, “I want YOU to unlock the safe.” “Ma’am,” one of the tellers began, “There’s no money in the safe. It was all transferred to the top of the bank branch in Boulder Colorado. You just missed it this morning.” “Well, I want you to open the damn safe anyways!” I replied, raising my voice. She nodded, held up the keys. One of the tellers at the counter finished filling up my bag. “When the bags are full, tighten the draw strings and set them on the counter. I will get them when I get back.” They nodded, silently. I followed the teller with the keys to the safe. I followed her as we walked down a hallway, then she stopped at a large metal door. She inserted a key, turned it, and then turned a large circular handle on the door. The door opened with a metallic sound, and she stepped back.
“You have got to be kidding me.” I said, looking into the safe and seeing nothing but an empty room. “Of all the god damned banks in this town I pick the one with no money!!” I pointed my gun at the teller. “Why was the cash transferred?” “The cash in the vault is cash from savings accounts. All accounts are computerized. We keep just enough cash in the registers up front to be able to cash out any customer’s savings account, up to the maximum allowed withdrawal.” “Maximum allowed withdrawal?” “Yeah. It’s all the money you can withdraw in one twenty four hour period. It’s currently two thousand dollars per customer per day. At any one time, there’s about two million dollars in the vault and about ten thousand dollars in the tills up front…” “You mean to tell me that I just robbed a bank for TEN THOUSAND DOLLARS?! Get your ass back up front!” I yelled, motioning with my gun. We walked back up to the front tills. I walked up to the tellers and noticed that most of the customers had gotten out, except for three still lying on the floor. I grabbed my full money bags and started toward the door, until I saw flashing red and blue lights outside. “The cops are here! Who hit the alarm?!” The tellers were silent. I knew one of them had hit the silent alarm.
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“I want YOU to unlock the safe.” “Ma’am,” one of the tellers began, “There’s no money in the safe. It was all transferred to the top of the bank branch in Boulder Colorado. You just missed it this morning.” “Well, I want you to open the damn safe anyways!” I'm having trouble reading it...
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