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CHYNADALL |
passion love and broken hearts
Oct 18 2011, 9:26 PM EDT
Well, it was interesting that you made Eric a bad guy! I also found it bizzarr the relationship between Calliegh and Horatio. None of it fits the charactors on the show. Maybe that's not the angle you are going for. As I read the story, I can't picture the original charactors. It's like reading about total strangers with familiar names. I'm not saying it's a bad story. The premise of the story is great, I'm just not feeling the chactors.
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